♫Finchie♫
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Cats: I`m begining to understand why I like them so much
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Post by ♫Finchie♫ on Dec 21, 2010 2:14:02 GMT -5
[/color][/size][/center] It`s Gets Like A Prison In
The Body I`m Living In
Cause Everyone`s Watching
A smooth breeze tossed about the colorful leaves, oranges and yellows, browns and reds. Blending almost prefectly with these colors was a small she-cat, no more than 8 moons old. She was perched in a low branch, on the very edge of FireClan territory. Before her, black and foreboding, sat the Thunderpath. Its acrid stench floated around her and masked her scent perfectly. No Clan cat would ever know she was there, unless they were looking closely at the tree. An orange leaf drifted down past her nose, and the little she-cat started batting at it. Dark amber eyes locked on it playfully, watching as it fluttered down out of reach. It met the ground a few heartbeats later, and the little loner decided to follow. She slid down gracefully, almost like a bird in the way she descended to the ground. That was what gave her the name Flacon, which sounded so much more intimidating than the female actually was. She landed with a soft thwump on the ground, where the leaf had been only a second before. The wind carried it away from her white paws, lifted it up, and carried it half-way across the Thunderpath before dropping it again. She looked around, not wishing to cross over away from the trees, but wanting to get the leaf. She shot across quickly, snaging the edge with her claw and draging the leaf to the other side. The meadow before her was strange, though she`d been there a few times. It was known as Loner Meadow, though it seemed to be uninhabited. Falcon gave a shrug and continued playing with her leaf, letting out a playfull growl every once in a while. Quick To Start Talking "Words" "Thoughts"
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Post by ~Ravenpaw~ on Dec 21, 2010 2:29:59 GMT -5
Raven, she was a young she-cat, only 8 moons, not even a warrior, young, beautiful, but dangerous for her age, dispite her small look. She named herself, her old name unsuited her for, unfitting, unnatural. Dove, what a horrible name, completely unlike her. Her pelt a pure black colour, her eyes a deep yellow, she was well built from fighting other rogues, she eve had a bit of her left ear torn off, nothing to serious though, but it added to her look of danger. It wasn't just her look though, her personality was one you didn't want to mess with either, Raven is the kind of cat you want as a friend, she'd ruin your life if you made youself an enemy. Not to say she isn't nice, but she's not, she is mostly mean all the time, her sarcastic tongue unmatched, her harsh words and comments. Raven will, however if she trusts you will be nice to you, in a weird kinda way, her own way of showing it. She knows her way around and simply refuses to to take no for an answer, if you want her as a friend, best stay on her good side and never, ever call her a kittypet.
Kittypet, she shuddered at the word, almost threating to hiss, how she hated that word, dispite her once being a kittypet she hated being called one because of her past, if she ever saw another one, she'd most likely claws it's eyes out, she hated them so much. She caught a strange scent which broke her train of thought, "Mouse-dung" She swore quietly, she hoped it wasn't a clan cat, she was interested in them, but now was not a good time, she took in a breath again and noticed it wasn't, so she decided to stalk after it and see what it what that had caught her nose. She spotted another female and wondered who she was. "Who are you?" Raven questioned.
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♫Finchie♫
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Cats: I`m begining to understand why I like them so much
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Post by ♫Finchie♫ on Dec 21, 2010 2:42:44 GMT -5
It`s Gets Like A Prison In
The Body I`m Living In
Cause Everyone`s Watching
Ears twitched around to catch the sound of a voice, another she-cat. Falcon`s head turned slowly to look at the other feline, mind suddenly off of the leaf. Her eyes narrowed for a moment, and her orange ear flicked. She sat back on her haunches, tail flicking about on the ground. The wind stoped for a momen, then resumed. This time it was lazy, slow, almost lke it was wary of the two cats. As though it were waiting for some unseen, unheard que to suddenly bluster up and bowl them over. But nothing happened, it stayed lazy, slow. Falcon parted her jaws in a yawn, and studied the other cat up and down. The forst word that came to Falcon`s mind was serious, then mean. However, she said nothing. After a few more heartbeats, she let a few words slide from her lips. "Depends on who`s asking, ad why they want to know." A risky response, for the act that she had no idea who this cat was, but none the less she figured it was one that would produce something fun.
Quick To Start Talking
"Words" "Thoughts"
Word Count: 189
Comments: Falcon is.... odd. |
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Post by ~Ravenpaw~ on Dec 21, 2010 2:54:19 GMT -5
Raven's yellow eyes narrowed at the she-cat's response, she snarled lightly. "They call me Raven" She said, "And I want to know mainly because if I end up fighting you I like to know who I am trying to kill" She growled. Raven was a tough cat, she had many fights in her past, even though she was young, her looks and name didn't lie, she was as black as night and just as cold hearted, her muscles were strong and slightly rippled as she moved. Raven's torn ear made her look even more strong. She smirked a bit, "Unless of course your just a weak loner?" She asked curiously, she prefered to fight on Rogue territory of which she had made her home and was one of the toughest ones. Sure many were much older, but they didn't have Raven's fighting spirit.
Raven was a rogue, always was, at least in her mind and heart she was. Raven dug her claws into the ground as she waited for the she-cat's answer, Raven got bored easily, and loved to fight, it showed in that dark glint in her yellow eyes. But if this she-cat was just a mere loner then she wasn't even worth getting excited about fighting.
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♫Finchie♫
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Cats: I`m begining to understand why I like them so much
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Post by ♫Finchie♫ on Dec 21, 2010 3:10:58 GMT -5
It`s Gets Like A Prison In
The Body I`m Living In
Cause Everyone`s Watching
A little smile crossed Falcon`s lips. "A bit touchy now, aren`t we?" she meowed, rising to her paws. Her tail tip flicked, and the loner lifted her chin and narrowed her eyes a bit. "The name`s Falcon. But what makesyou so sure we`re gonna fight?" she asked, claws sliding out and digging into the earth. The wind stopped again, the birds stopped singing, too. It was as though they were waiting again, waiting for the clash of fangs and claws. No further words came from Falcon, she simply lashed her tail and flicked her ears. One flick, two flicks. Suddenly, whoosh. She launched herself at the black she-cat. "I am no weak loner!" Her claws outstretched, she flew at raven, ears flat. Her claws aimed at Raven`s ears, she dashed foreward, tail streaming behind her.
Quick To Start Talking
"Words" "Thoughts"
Word Count: Screw it. I`ll do it later.
Comments: This is fail post. |D |
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Post by ~Ravenpaw~ on Dec 21, 2010 22:30:10 GMT -5
Raven was a loner, well more a rogue over loner, she had killed her own mother and shunned her name, she was Now Raven, her old life left behind. She wandered out, ways away from where she had last been, but now she had something more interesting to look upon. Raven's dark yellow eyes glanced upon a small cat who had dare to talk back to her. "Are you now? Could have fooled me playing with that leaf?" Raven snickered, she dodged out of the way easily, she had done so many times before. Raven hissed lowly, slyly she slipped out more coming more close, she looked at Falcon with her dark yellow eyes, she leapt foreward her sharp claws extended.
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♫Finchie♫
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Cats: I`m begining to understand why I like them so much
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Post by ♫Finchie♫ on Dec 24, 2010 21:59:11 GMT -5
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Falcon`s paws hit the ground with a soft thwump, and as she landed she twisted her body so she could slide sideways, out of reach of the hostile feline. She lowered her body, mucsles tense and ready to spring.
"Could`ve fooled me playing with that leaf?"
Upon hearing those words, her ears flattened and anger bubbled up from her stomache, ripping though her throat and out her jaws in a fearsome growl. The fur on her hackles lifted straight up, and she dug her claws into the earth. Falcon`s tail lashed back and forth, dark amber eyes wide. "How I act is none of your buisness, you flea-bitten mage pelt!"
"Curiouser and Curiouser"
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tagged: Raven
muse: TT^TT
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Post by ~Ravenpaw~ on Jan 7, 2011 9:29:52 GMT -5
Raven smirked, her dark yellow eyes narrow, she licked her lips, the wanting to taste blood filled her beautifully sly mind. "Now we have a fight" She said in a demonicly low voice, adding her own fearsome growl, digging her own claws into the ground, she took no notice of the insult, why? because she was Raven, insults didn't bother her too much at all. "I am not a flea-bitten mage pelt" She meowed, "I'm a monster!" She snarled and leapt at her again slashing at her.
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